Detailed Feedback:

Dear Vivaan Singh Bhandari, 🌟 you did an absolutely fantastic job reciting your poem in the video and your teacher loved how clearly you spoke every word with such great energy, also your expressions were wonderful and they made the poem even more fun to listen to, moreover it was clear that you practiced a lot and that really showed in your confident performance. Your enthusiasm for the poem made everyone feel happy, and I could see how much you enjoyed sharing it with us, furthermore you used good rhythm and pauses which helped tell the story beautifully. To make your next performance even better, try to remember to smile a little more while you are speaking because it makes your audience feel connected to you, and maybe you could add some hand movements or gestures to express the feelings of the poem even more.